Archive for November, 2007

29
Nov

Lessons Learned and Going Forward

   Posted by: Michell    in SWN Archives

Nanowrimo is almost over for another year, although it was over for me over a week ago when I finished my 50,000 words.  Despite hitting my goals it didn’t turn out quite the way I expected.  I had all these hopes of spending time with my fellow Nano’s in the form of chats, write-ins and various other mixer-type events.

As it turned out, I only made it to one event the entire month (although I do expect to attend the TGIO party) and two chats.  From that perspective, Nano this year was a bust.

Fortunately, the networking aspect is not the only measure of Nanowrimo for me.  I have to look closely at those things that I actually learned over the course of the month too.

The first learning of value for me is the realization that regardless of what’s going on with my life, I can write every day and meet deadlines.  I had decided early on that I would finish Nano by November 20th.  I also set a challenge for myself to be done sooner than that.  I completed my manuscript by November 18th, so mission accomplished.

I also got a glimpse at what I think professional writers go through.  They slog through the initial writing of a manuscript knowing that it will need polishing.  I wrote this book and could see where things were weak and I’ve already got ideas on how to make the book stronger.  That glimpse has made me feel more like a writer than ever before.

Third lesson learned is that the more prepared I am with my plotting and outlining, the better I like it.  This year I had a rough idea of where I wanted the story to go but I didn’t spend the same amount of time outlining the story as I did last year.  That led to some “throw-away” prose within the story.  I don’t like having anything that I already consider garbage.  I would much rather have 50,000 words of quality story to make the cuts difficult than have 12,000 words that I already know need to be discarded.  Next year I’ll have a solid outline ready.

I think the single biggest thing I’m taking out of Nano this year really has nothing to do with Nanowrimo at all.  Strange thing to say, I know, but hear me out; although I’ve been writing for most of my life, I have yet to be published in anything.  That in itself really doesn’t mean much; writing for the shear joy of it is as good a reason as any.

Where I feel I’m falling short is, I’ve made it a goal to become published, and sooner than later.  That’s great, but what have I done to accomplish it?  I’ve sent my first book out a handful of times.  Period.

Now that I have three manuscripts done, I need to rethink the whole goal.  I’ve got to put some parameters and time-frames around it.  If I don’t, then by this time next year, I’ll have four manuscripts and be no closer to having any of them published.

That is NOT what I want.  Not by a long shot.

So… here is the new goal… and please, I expect you all to hold me to it.

I will be editing my second book between now and January 1st of 2008.  As of January 1st, the manuscript will be polished and ready for publishers.  I will have a list of no fewer than six publishers who I will send the book out to.  I will focus on getting the book out as many times as it takes to get it published.

As of January 1st, while my second book is making the rounds, I will begin the major rewrite on my first book.  I will spend between 4 and 6 months rewriting that story at which time it will begin to make the rounds.  That puts it out and about by no later than July 1, 2008.

Now, let me pause for a moment to explain why I’m doing it in that order.  I’m actually getting my second story ready first because I know it is more polished and closer to being ready than the first.  I also know that the market is more favorable for my young readers book than for my adult fantasy.  Now back to my plan…

Once I have both my first and second books in circulation, I will begin the editing effort on this year’s Nano book.  Keep in mind that there is one event that can drastically change my whole plan.

That would be the acceptance of my second book by a publisher.  Obviously, when that happens, I’ll be doing what needs to be done to get it up to the publisher’s standards.  That will push back the rewrite of my first story.  It could even happen while I’m rewriting book one, so timing could be interesting.

I will also be outlining and plotting next year’s Nano book while I am doing all the rest.

The one piece to this plan is you don’t actually see me doing much new writing.  Since I don’t find editing to be particularly interesting at times, I will try to do a bit of short story writing in between.  That will be a new thing for me since I typically focus on the longer narratives.

All in all, I’ve got a pretty aggressive plan going forward.  I’m happy to say that I’ve already started editing my second story.  I have trimmed something like 2,000 words without any ill effect to the story and I’m only just beginning, so it looks promising.  I’ve also identified the first two publishers that I’m going to send it to.  Only four more to go.

I’ll keep you posted on how it’s going for me. 

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22
Nov

It’s a Wonderful Life

   Posted by: Michell    in SWN Archives

It’s been another interesting week, but in a good way for a change.  I’m still limping along without my laptop (no that’s not any of the good news).  In fact, that will probably be status quo for the next several weeks (unfortunately).  I’m starting to wonder if the whole laptop thing is really worth it.  At least when I had a desktop, I could fix it myself.  I didn’t need to get someone else to send it away for repairs.

Enough complaining, though.  As I was saying, a few good things happened.  Number one with a bullet is I finished the Nanowrimo challenge.  Once again, I was able to get done in 20 days.  My final total was 50,076.  I did make one minor mistake this year though.  I started writing knowing that some of my book would be throw-away.

What do I mean by that?  Well, I was writing a young readers book.  That genre typically maxes out at around 38,000 words.  If you do the math, that means I would be writing approximately 12,000 words more than I actually needed.

I was comfortable with that.  After all, when you are editing a book for the first time, you typically shave anywhere from 20 – 40% of the story right off the top.  Wasn’t I just building in the extra right off the bat?  While it sounds awfully clever, in fact it only encourages sloppy writing.  I’ll admit it, there were a couple days where I wasn’t trying as hard to write as tightly as I might have otherwise.

This is a major departure from other times I’ve been writing.  Last year, for example, I was working on the first book in my series (for young readers).  It was a story that I had wanted to write for at least two decades.  There were times I couldn’t type fast enough to keep up with the ideas.  When the book was finished and I started looking at it with an editor’s eye, I realized it was much better than I had expected.

This year, I know that the story is sound, but will need a LOT of editing to make it ready for publishing.  The good side to that is I already have some ideas about how the editing has to happen.  I’ve also set up a solid plan for myself.  It goes something like this:  I’ve got three complete books written now that only need some editing (in two cases) and a re-write in the other.  I will be taking last year’s Nano book and I will spend the next two months whipping it into shape.  At that point, it will begin making the rounds for publishing.

While it is making the rounds, I will focus on rewriting my first book (an Adult fantasy).  I will spend approximately six months getting it rewritten and edited at which time I will begin sending it out for publishing.  Then and only then will I start any new projects.  I may just let this year’s Nano book continue to rest, but I definitely want at least one new project underway next year.

That’s my rough plan.

Let’s see… what else has happened?

Well, I went to the Nano half-way party and got to visit with some of the acquaintances from last year.  It was a fun evening.  As I’ve said before, part of the appeal of Nano (for me, anyway) is the social aspect.  Up until the past week, I hadn’t really been participating in any of the chats.  Finally, on Friday night I got back into the chat aspect of things.

It’s odd, but the chat is pretty subdued compared to last year.  I’m not sure why except maybe I was on it so much that I was having a bit of fun egging on the rest of the Calgary region writers.  I know I participated in my fair share of word wars.  However, I have decided to hang up my keyboard for word wars… I’ll happily moderate them, but I went undefeated last year and I know that I’m typing considerably faster this year.  It wouldn’t be fair.

On that note, I also want to mention that I have now had two 2,300 (one was slightly above 2300 words and the other was above 2600) word hours for Nanowrimo.  That works out to be about 38 and 43 words per minute.  If you ever hear me complaining that I don’t have enough time to write, please give me a smack.  At those sorts of rates, I can easily knock off 500 words per day any time.  I have no excuses not to find 15 minutes every day.

That is part of why it has been a good week too.  I may just consider working on something new just to keep the creative juices flowing while I do my editing.  It might be just the catalyst that I need.  And as I just said, I can definitely find 15 minutes to write, even if it’s just before I go to bed.

There was also a non-Nano happening that was good.  At least in my mind it was a good thing.

For those of you who remember, I entered The Writing Show’s “First Chapter Contest” a while back.  On the 15th, I finally got my much anticipated feedback for my entry.  Let me begin by saying that I did not win, or come in second or even earn an honorable mention.  In case you are now wondering why I consider this to be a good thing, allow me to explain.

I have said many times that feedback, good quality feedback, is worth its weight in gold.  With that certainly being true, I received a wealth of feedback for my submission.

I haven’t quite decided if I’m going to complete the story or not.  When I wrote it, I actually had it plotted to be a complete story although the plotting did need more details.  That certainly isn’t the point.  What makes the feedback so very valuable to me is the fact that I wrote the submission with the same thought processes and care that I write full-fledged books.  All the feedback for the submission is equally viable for all the other stuff I’ve ever written.

That is why I’m so thrilled with what I’ve received.   I firmly believe that the comments made against my submission will allow me to do better next year and to put a much more solid product forth to the various publishers I submit to.  Ultimately, I believe it will help me to become the published author I aim to be.

So there you have it.  It has been a very good week all around.  I’m starting to feel like a real writer and with that feeling I’m more certain than ever that I will have a book published one day soon.

I hope your week has been just as fulfilling.

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15
Nov

NanoWriMo, The Real Story (or Nano, Week 2)

   Posted by: Michell    in SWN Archives

I have a confession to make.  Last week wasn’t quite as rosy as I made it out to be.

I honestly wasn’t out to fool anyone, but as it turned out, I forgot about the problem until after my post was complete.  You’re probably thinking that the problem wasn’t anything much.  Maybe I forgot to call my mom, or I missed a day of writing for Nanowrimo.

As it turns out, while it’s not anything dire, it is something that should be at the front of my mind right now.  You see, my laptop went back into the shop last week.  Yup, once again, that most critical of tools is on the fritz for the second time in three months.

Pretty good timing, don’t you think?

If you recall back to an earlier, pre-Nanowrimo post, I was putting some contingency plans in place for the possibility of problems.  I had an extra keyboard and mouse on stand-by and I was planning to keep multiple copies of my story.

I didn’t actually expect the laptop to go down completely, but I had my wife’s trusty desktop computer as a hot spare if I really needed it.  Turns out, I did and I do.

There were a couple anxious moments when I discovered that my laptop wasn’t working properly.  The machine kept freezing up; I was able to diagnose the problem to being related to the laptop’s USB ports.

When I started troubleshooting the problem further, it looked like maybe a faulty external hard drive was the problem and that was a BIG problem.  Why, you might ask?  Simply put, it had the most recent version of my Nano story on it.  If the drive was toast, I still would have an older backup (see the multiple versions backup plan).  The problem there was I just had my single best writing day to date; I would have lost about 5,000 words of prose that I couldn’t bear to see gone.

I almost hung up my Nano hat for the year.  Almost, that is, until I realized through additional testing that the hard drive was fine but the computer was toast.

Now do you see why I have a hard time believing that I forgot to mention it in my last post?  Yeah, it escapes me too.

I can claim that I was very tied up with work (true) and that I had a number of personal projects on the go at home (also true).  I still don’t know how I forgot.  Considering what I’m focused on achieving this month, it is a big problem.  Maybe I was hoping that if I ignored the problem, it would go away.

It hasn’t, in case you’re wondering.

I’ve been able to keep up a good writing pace despite the problem, but it has been more painful than it needs to be.  I’m still averaging about 2,500 words per day and the story is going well.  Still, I just can’t shake the realization that I was able to forget about the laptop crash.

The lesson I should have sitting in the front of my mind is the one about backups and version control.  I’m always very conscientious about version control, but not having multiple versions of the story (and even worse, not thinking about it after almost being bitten) worries me.

I think I’m getting too complacent in the measures I’ve put in place.  I have a shared drive on my home network but what if it goes?  I’m thinking a backup to CD or DVD is definitely in order.  Hard copies might be in order too.

I was able to survive a bad crash quite a while ago.  I had burned all my writing to CD and I had the files on two external hard drives and a USB Flash drive.  What I didn’t have was all my email backed up.

After the crash I celebrated my foresight in backing up my writing… and I cursed myself for all the lost email.  Some of it was irreplaceable.  For example, my email from Dave Duncan which I had carefully stored away is gone.  So are some of my communications with publishers and other writers.

Now they only live in my mind.

Enough talking about the issue, it’s time to backup.  And might I suggest you do a little of it yourself?

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