Archive for September, 2010

29
Sep

The End of Step One

   Posted by: Michell    in About Writing, Books, Irreverent Muse

I used to think that writing a book was the only thing I needed to do to be a writer. I guess in a way I was right. By writing, I am a writer. Just not a published one.

Now that I have done some writing and even gotten a couple stories published, I know that the writing can be the easiest part (believe it or not) of the process. I was reminded of this when I looked at my most recently completed story.

As you may or may not know, on Sunday I finished writing my podcast novel, GalaxyBillies. It was a lot of work but it is finally done. At least, the podcast version is. I hadn’t been finished five minutes before I was thinking about what other things I needed to do with the story.

You see, if enough people enjoy it, I hope to eventually see it in print. So what do I have to do to get there?

Well here are the basic steps as I see them:

  1. Let the story rest for a few months. This is a very necessary step for me because it after leaving it alone I can see where the story is weak/too long/too short/etc.
  2. Pull the podcast script together into a book format.
  3. Rip out any pieces that were intended to aid in the flow of the podcast but aren’t necessary in a book.
  4. Do a first pass read to identify where I see any problems and put place holders where I need to add.
  5. Revise manuscript to fix problems and add additional story.
  6. Bring in Alpha readers to review manuscript.
  7. Revise manuscript based on comments.
  8. Bring in Beta readers to review manuscript.
  9. See step number 7.
  10. Put final polish on story and put together submission package including synopsis, elevator speech, list of writing credits and size of podcast audience (provided it was significant, of course).
  11. Research agents and/or publishers.
  12. Begin submitting.

Sounds like a lot of steps, doesn’t it? That’s partially because I’m trying to be thorough and partially because there REALLY are that many steps. Maybe even more for some writers.

Now do you begin to see why I say writing the story may be the easiest part?

There is one crucial item I left out: Keep writing. I know it might sound impossible with all the other things that need to be done, but it is imperative that you continue to work on your craft. Editing and revising take different writing muscles than actual storytelling so don’t stop.

I don’t tell you this to scare you away from writing either. I just want you to realize how much lurks beneath the waters, so to speak, so you don’t get to the end of step 1 and say, “OK, I’m done. Next project.” That might result in a lot of writing getting done, but it probably won’t get you published. Know the work ahead and rise to the challenge. That’s what I’m planning to do.

Personal Update

Yup, GalaxyBillies is done. I’m not sure it was all it could be, but I plan to edit it until it is and give fans of the story an even better one than they heard on the podcast.

I’m also back to revising the YA Novel. Last night I finished editing chapter 15 which means only 7 more to go before I send it off to the publisher. I hope they like what I’ve done with it.

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26
Sep

GalaxyBillies – Episode 19

   Posted by: Michell    in Galaxybillies

Well folks, this is the end. Now we all have a chance to find out what happens to Earth, Greklor, Grokmar, MegaDan and, of course, the humans themselves.

I would like to thank you all for joining me on this journey. It has been both gruelling and extremely rewarding. The next step for the story is to move it over to Podiobooks.com. I’m also going to shelf the story for a few months before I come back and edit it into book form. If I’m lucky, it will see a paper version in the near future.

One last thing. I will be making t-shirts available to celebrate GalaxyBillies completion and move to podiobooks. Watch for it in the next two weeks if you are interested. I might even be putting a few more interesting pieces together too.

I would also like to invite you to send your comments, feedback and questions to galaxybillies at irreverentmuse dot com or to my voicemail line at 206.203.2031. I’ll answer anything you send me.

Please take a few moments and let me know what you thought of the story; what you liked and what didn’t work for you. That feedback will help me a great deal when I start editing the story.

I also have two Facebook groups for GalaxyBillies. Friends of GalaxyBillies and Michell Plested’s GalaxyBillies. I’d love to have you join.

Thank you again for joining me on my story journey.

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22
Sep

Story Ideas

   Posted by: Michell    in About Writing, Irreverent Muse

With NaNoWriMo fast approaching, I wanted to talk about the process where I develop my own ideas into stories. For the purpose of this I will use a sample idea and work it through.

Coming up with a story idea

This is the single easiest part of the story for me. I get story ideas from everywhere all the time. From television, movies, other books, going for walks and hearing the news. The commonly held belief among “Experts” is that there are no new idea. Just new ways to execute them. Whether that’s true or not I don’t know. I just know that I get these cool story ideas running through my head and I can’t wait to start writing.

So here goes. My story idea is as follows: A young woman decides to visit her grandmother who has been feeling poorly. She pulls on her new red cloak and grabs a basket of goodies for dear old granny.

Sounds familiar, right?

Decide on a genre/setting

Next I settle on a genre to develop the idea further. This may sound rather strange, but it is important. A different genre and/or setting will really change how everything develops including the characters.

So I decide the genre will be a Crime/Thriller. Not something I normally dabble in, but it sounds like fun. The setting will be in an all-Portuguese neighbourhood. Any particular reason? Not really, but I have Portuguese friends and I don’t want to be cliche’ with an Italian one. :)

Characters

I have three main characters in my little story.

There is my female lead who I will call Adriana. She isn’t your typical young woman. She spends her days hussling pool at the local pool hall. Most nights she works the docks, rolling any drunken sailers she finds for the money in their wallets. She does this because her parents each work two jobs to try and pay the bills. She had to drop out of school to earn extra money.

Then there is granny. She’s a feisty old bird who runs numbers at the local bar which she has owned and operated for more than fifty years. She hasn’t been feeling quite herself lately because a group of “Businessmen” paid her a visit to convince her that she needed “protection”.

She convinced those men to go away with a thorough beating which they won’t soon forget. Unfortunately, she threw her back out doing so and is laid up at the moment.

The last character is an eager young rookie cop who only wants to clean up his old neighbourhood. He has his nose in everything that looks dirty and is watching young Adriana as she makes her way to see granny. He stops her to question her and decides he wants to run a sting operation to shutdown some of the crime he knows is going on.

Does this still sound like the same story you might have thought of at the beginning? It certainly deviates from the idea I had originally. Now what if I changed it to be Science Fiction? How about Romance? All I did was take an old story and twist it to the point where it wasn’t quite so recognizable. What if I had removed any reference to a red cloak?

As you can see, ideas are easy. It’s what you do with them that makes them unique. So what are you going to do for NaNo?

Personal Update

One last episode of GalaxyBillies is quickly looming on the horizon. I’m about half finished writing it and I must say, I’m excited to see how it ends. Like my listeners, I don’t know exactly what’s going to happen. Granted, I do have some idea since I’m the one writing it, but since I don’t have it all plotted out, there will still be some surprises.

I’ll be glad to get it finished. After all, I’ve been living and breathing the story for more than forty weeks now. It’s time to put it to bed for a while and get working on my other projects.

That leads me to my YA novel. I really want to get the revisions done on it. I know I haven’t had the brainpower to give it everything it deserves so that is my next priority. I also have four (or is it five?) short stories to write for various anthologies in the next two months. That’s not even talking about NaNo or a secret project that I will starting very soon. All told, the next few months are going to be VERY busy.

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