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Jun

Dealing With the Dreaded Negative Feedback

   Posted by: Michell

When I made the decision to write and podcast “GalaxyBillies”, I wasn’t entirely sure what I was getting myself into. Would people like the story? Would they hate it? Would I be able to pull it off at all?

But, since without risk there can be no reward, I decided to take a stab at it.

As we all do, I watched eagerly for any feedback I could get. And I watched… and then I watched some more. I eventually started to see some positive feedback trickle in and I was relieved when nothing bad was forthcoming.

So far, so good.

Unfortunately, the amount of feedback was almost zero which, to me, meant the story wasn’t really worth commenting on. And then, I saw my first 1-star rating of the story on iTunes.

Not the best start; the comment essentially said GalaxyBillies was a direct rip-off of Star Wars and a few other science fiction stories. That was a relatively easy comment to deal with. First, I laughed a little, because, there are nods to Star Wars in some of the episodes. The story is meant to be a comedy after all. I put some parody elements into it purposely. You may remember me mentioning in the past that I had Easter Eggs in every episode.

That told me the comment came from someone who was expecting a serious science fiction story and didn’t quite “Get” it. That I could live with.

The second comment was a 2-star one that said the characters fell flat after the first couple chapters. I won’t deny that I didn’t do as much development as I wanted. I won’t make any excuses either. So, I check that off to an astute reader. When I revise the story for the book version, I will spend some time fixing that problem. Thank you for the constructive criticism.

The comment I absolutely DON’T understand came last month on Podiobooks. Someone flamed the story, saying it was racist and disgusting. That comment hurt. A lot. Racism and prejudice are things I take very seriously, so being told I wrote a story that was blatantly racist bothered me.

It still does.

I have to keep reminding me that I didn’t write it to be racist. In fact, while the characters are caricatures of common stereotypes, I do write them with many redeeming qualities. And, by-the-way (spoiler alert here), they do save the day, so I can’t be trying too hard to make them out to be lower life forms.

Did I respond to any of the above negative feedback? No! I’ve seen too many instances where an author tried to respond and things ended badly. I’m not interested in going there. More to the point, in the last case especially, I don’t think the commenter even read the story. What good would responding to them do? They would not be convinced of my good intentions.

No, I thought about what was said, and dealt with it. I’m a big boy, so a little criticism, even unwarranted, won’t kill me. If anything, it helped to thicken my skin a little more for next time.

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I have had the good fortune to read and enjoy the work of Tee Morris and Philippa Ballantine for several years. I like the writing styles of both but they are very different. When I heard that they were collaborating on a book, and a steampunk one at that, I was cautiously optimistic. Not because I didn’t think they could pull it off, but because I had no idea what the meshing of their two voices would be like.

In other words, would the result be a symphony or a cacophony?

I am delighted to say that the book, “Phoenix Rising: A Ministry of Peculiar Occurrences Novel” is a symphony of the highest order. The characters are rich and the plot twists in a most satisfactory manner. And the pace of the story? Well, let’s just say I had to put the novel down periodically to catch my breath.

Tee and Pip (or Pip and Tee, if you would prefer) show what good research can do to improve a story. The use of language and the description of the everyday world ensured that I felt as if I were experiencing an alternate, steam-powered version of Victorian England.

Of course, steampunk is famous for its gadgets, gears, and cogs; writers must tread a fine line to ensure that these things do not overwhelm or undermine the story. That is not a problem here in the least.

The technology was in no way frivolous or ill conceived; the melding of our world and the steampunk realm was done cleanly and to great effect. It made me wish our technology was steam-powered now.

The relationships between the characters were ever evolving and interesting and the characters themselves surprised and delighted me with their layers upon layers of complexity. By the time I was done reading, they were living, breathing people, some whom I liked and others I reviled.

It may sound cliché but the only complaint I have with this book is that I am finished reading it and there isn’t another one ready to go. Believe me when I say, there are enough loose threads that I hope to be enjoying the series for a long time to come.

For now, I may have to reread it again just to pick up nuances I’m sure I’ve missed.

All in all, an extremely good book that I whole-heartedly endorse.

 

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I’ve been thinking a lot about books and how they are being published. Probably very much like a lot of you are too.

The publishing industry is undergoing some extremely big changes from the way authors are signed to books published and finally distributed and sold. It seems to me that there is a parallel to the huge format change (albeit a small one) that has me thinking in a certain direction. The parallel I’m thinking of is that of DVD to Blu-Ray.

You may argue that the change in format was a minor thing. The DVD’s published under the old standard continue to hit the shelves and the Blu-Ray are starting to fill the niche. Sounds a little like paper-bound books and eBooks, doesn’t it. Paper-bound books continue to be published and sold and eBooks are gaining ground by the day. Not a perfect comparison but still valid, I think.

The movie companies quickly noted that with the expense of new Blu-ray DVD players, people weren’t flocking to the new format. Especially after many made the investment into the competing (and ultimately failed) standard of HD-DVD. To combat that and encourage the movement to Blu-ray, many forward thinking companies started to sell Blu-ray discs with a DVD version and, in many cases, a digital version for a few dollars more.

This is what I consider to be the brilliant part of the equation. Blu-Ray players are backward compatible to old DVD’s. That means, when someone finally buys the newer technology, they will still be able to play their libraries plus their new stuff. I believe many people will get to a critical mass of Blu-ray discs where they decide it only makes sense to upgrade. The added benefit of cheap HD Televisions is only the icing on the cake.

So where am I going with this?

The way I see it, there are three kinds of readers. The ones who buy books to read and collect, the ones who buy books to read and discard and the kind who do a bit of both. The first group will always buy books. They may wish for the convenience of eBooks, but ultimately they will always buy paper. The second group will embrace eBooks because they are cheaper and easy to get. Third group will want a combination of paper books and eBooks.

You might not be able to tell but my fevered brain is starting to tick along quite nicely by this time.

I am one of those people who falls into both the first and third groups. I largely buy books to read and collect but my space is rapidly diminishing. That means I’ve had to be more selective about what I buy/read. If I could get eBooks instead I wouldn’t have as much space problems plus I’d have instant access to my library wherever I happen to be. Since I reread many of my books over and over, that is a very good thing.

I actually got myself an e-reader to help combat the problem. There were three books I wanted to read badly so I went shopping online to see how much they were in e-format. I was shocked to see that all three books averaged over $17 per eBook.

I don’t know about you, but I’m not paying that for an eBook.

I thought about why that was and I came to the conclusion that the publishers in question were trying to protect their hardcover sales. What they actually did was convince me to wait for the paperback versions to come out. Maybe then the eBook will come down in price. So they have lost both the expensive eBook and hardcover sales from me.

I don’t want that to happen to me.

What the publishers should have done, and I’m sure this idea isn’t unique, is to bundle both the hardcover with the eBook. Charge a couple bucks more to get both. Don’t make the eBook available until the book is in paperback if you are so worried. The people who read paperbacks are used to waiting anyhow and people like me will actually buy the hardback for the collect-ability and get the eBook for the portability. They get an extra quick eBook sale and don’t drive me off in frustration at stupid prices. They could even offer the eBook at the inflated price as a stand-alone. That might drive people to buy the bundle for the great savings.

One group that seem to have figured this out is Flying Island Press. They are purely digital in that they only offer their magazine in e-formats and audio. The beauty is, you can get the magazine in one or the other or both. If you chose both, it is at a discount.

That is what I would like to do (keep in mind, this is totally off the cuff and my publisher may tell me to forget it). Offer my audience my books as paper, e-format or both. If you were to chose  both, you get the eBook at a reduced price. It really makes sense to me because it addresses the needs of all three of the above groups. It might even boost my bundled sales. I know, if I were offered that possibility, I would jump at it.

I know what you’re thinking: it wouldn’t save my space problem. You are right about that, but I could put the (collected) books directly into books for storage where they will be out of the way and safe. The eBooks would be for reading wherever I am.

What do you think? Is my idea crazy? I think it would work both because it offers options and good value. It would give readers that forward progression path for when/if they get an eReader (and since you can get free ones for your computer pretty much anywhere, who wouldn’t use it?) too. I see it as a Win/Win situation as long as you don’t overprice it. $17 for an eBook is an insult when I can buy the Hardback for $25. $27 or $30 for both is something I would consider.

I hope publishers will do the same.

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