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I have to confess, I was nervous about the revisions for “Mik Murdoch, Boy Superhero”. It’s a book I’ve put a lot of myself into. What kinds of changes would my editor (and, by extension, my publisher) require?

I was pretty lucky, actually. My editor, Robert Runte’ sent me the manuscript with all the revision requests marked PLUS an extra comments sheet. I think he was handling me with kid gloves so I wouldn’t spontaneously combust when I saw the edits. :)

I was grateful for his comments, but at the same time a little worried. What horrors awaited me?

I waited a day before I opened the actual manuscript and, while there is some work to do, it wasn’t quite as bad as it could have been.

So what kinds of things did I get called on? Well, there were a few things that could be common to a lot of first-time writers. So what were some of the common ones?

  1. Show don’t tell. It doesn’t really come up until the second half of the book. I think that is because I was starting to rush the story to get it finished.
  2. Make sure the characters act true to themselves. The one example was a politician I had in the story. He was basically thumbing his nose at my character because he was a kid. A real politician wouldn’t actively offend anyone. I also had a bully who was a bit two-dimensional because her motivations were pretty sparse. I’ve been challenged to make all the characters vibrant and interesting.
  3. Make sure the dialogue is true to the character. My hero, Mik Murdoch, is actually nine-years-old in this first book (he ages with each book). My initial thought was to make him a twelve-year-old reminiscing about when he was nine.  I had this ugly mish-mash of dialogue that was sometimes nine, sometimes twelve and sometimes something else. It didn’t really flow the way it was supposed to. I’ve now abandoned the reminiscing tone and just have the character as a nine-year-old. I was worried about what that would do to my audience, but, I think, the story is sophisticated enough that even adults will enjoy reading it.
  4. Wrong tense of words.
Those were the obvious ones I’ve noticed. In total, there were about four hundred comments, changes and rewrites requested. It sounds like a lot, I know, but Robert assures me it is pretty typical. For my own peace-of-mind, I’m obliged to take him at his word. :)
That takes me to how I plan to approach the edits. Many of them are small, but there are four hundred of them and I need to get this manuscript back to Robert by the end-of-September (that’s my deadline, not theirs; I’m hoping theirs is longer and I beat the clock, so-to-speak). Some of the edits are very small and others are much bigger. How do I do it and stay sane?
I think the route I will take is to target completion of a number of pages per night. Say ten. That should allow me to finish on time and even allow a little room for those times I cannot revise.
That’s the plan, anyway.
I’ll keep you updated.
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30
Sep

Baby Steps

   Posted by: Michell    in About Writing, Irreverent Muse

The idea of trying something new is often daunting, whether it is writing a story or trying yoga for the first time. I know when I’m faced with something new I often ask myself if I think I can do it. Will I enjoy it? Is it really worth making a fool of myself.

Despite all the self-doubt and apprehension, I usually go through with it and check off another thing done in the life experiences list. If I enjoy myself, I might even do it again.

The thing about that is, because the activity is unknown, my mind begins to build it up to something potentially scary. I don’t really know what to expect so I start to expect the worst.

That was how it was when I considered writing my first book.

I decided to do it and then found lots of ways to avoid actually putting the words down. First, I convinced myself that I needed to write a short story set in the world of my book idea. I would use the short story to flesh out the setting and culture and, in doing so, get some much needed writing experience.

That 5,500 word short story took me SIX months to write. Six Months! These days, I can write 5,500 words in a single sitting (provided the sitting is 4 hours or more). Then, once the story was complete and I got around to starting the book, I took 20+ iterations to get the first chapter written (note, I didn’t say finished). Seven years later, the first complete draft of the novel was done.

I turned around the very next month and wrote a 50,000 word YA novel in 21 days.

I think you would agree, there was a tiny difference in productivity. So why the BIG change?

In a nutshell, I was able to write the second book quicker because I knew I could do it. I also had figured out one of the big time-sinks in writing (continuous editing). I wasn’t intimidated by the idea of writing a book when I did the second one.

That’s all very well, you might say, but what about me? Let me begin by giving a piece of advice that I’ve heard dozens of times and I’m sure you have too: write a little every day. I know it sounds cliche’ but, trust me, that is the only secret (besides avoiding continuous editing).

Let’s start easy. Say you only have 10 minutes a day available between brushing your teeth and having your shower. Now, let’s assume that you type a blistering 10 words per minute in the time-honored method of hunt-and-peck.

10 words per minute x 10 minutes = 100 words per day

You do that 5 days a week and you will have 500 words a week, 2,000 words a month, 24,000 words a year. 1/4 of the way to a finished novel. That will get you a first draft in 4 years; 3 years less than I took.

Now, if you can type 20 words per minute, you’re up to 200 words per day and 50,000 per year. That is a complete YA novel.

But, 200 words is a lot, right? Not really. Think of it as a page of text double-spaced and you have 250 words (12 point font). I mean, a grocery list is probably 25 – 50 words. Does that seem like a lot to you?

What if you don’t know what to write or you don’t know the right sentence structure or you aren’t sure how to structure your sentences? You can do what I do when I’m faced with a big, complex project. I use bullet points to jot down the ideas before I work to flesh them out. That allows me to easily rearrange, add and delete stuff as I go. And guess what? 10 bullet points can probably work out to be 100 words (give or take).

Not so hard, is it? At least, it doesn’t sound hard. The difficulty is always putting it into practice. You have to be diligent and force yourself to get into new habits. Once you have done that, it should become pretty natural.

Remember to watch the big picture, but always pay special attention to the tiny piece that’s right in front of you.

Personal Update

Well, I received word on my YA novel last week and it was a rejection, unfortunately. Maybe the nicest rejection I’ve ever gotten, but a rejection just the same. Still, I received some good advice from that publisher when I met her at ConVersion. “Write more than one book,” she said. “The big publishers want to see that you can write more than one good book and they like series.”

So, I’m going to do the second book in the series for this year’s NanoWriMo and then next year I’m going to pitch the series to agents. That’s the plan.

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